Comments on: Sky Full of Butterflies http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/ Thu, 17 May 2012 18:04:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Autumn http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/#comment-872 Autumn Wed, 03 Dec 2008 16:14:29 +0000 http://glowstars.net/wpb/?p=676#comment-872 Lovely story, sad and touching. Good take on the prompt! Thanks, Autumn Lovely story, sad and touching. Good take on the prompt! Thanks, Autumn

]]> By: paisley http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/#comment-871 paisley Thu, 27 Nov 2008 13:48:37 +0000 http://glowstars.net/wpb/?p=676#comment-871 enough can never be said about the virtue of true patience... this was a wonderfully written piece.... my response to this prompt is on my just paisley... blog,, you can find the rss link in the sidebar of my ...why paisley??? blog that it seems your comment luv is following.... <abbr><em>paisley says <a href="http://whypaisley.com/2008/11/27/grace/" rel="nofollow">grace</a></abbr></em> enough can never be said about the virtue of true patience… this was a wonderfully written piece….

my response to this prompt is on my just paisley… blog,, you can find the rss link in the sidebar of my …why paisley??? blog that it seems your comment luv is following….

paisley says grace

]]> By: Lauri http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/#comment-870 Lauri Thu, 27 Nov 2008 12:50:19 +0000 http://glowstars.net/wpb/?p=676#comment-870 Interesting story, nice dialogue. The story keeps the reader interested and that is very important if this is part of a wider novel. My only criticism would be to get rid of the adverbs, try to pick more active verbs so your need for adverbs would be eliminated. (Sorry- ignore if you don't want these types of crits) <abbr><em>Lauri says <a href="http://thoughtsfrombotswana.blogspot.ca/2008/11/butterfly-people.html" rel="nofollow">The Butterfly People</a></abbr></em> Interesting story, nice dialogue. The story keeps the reader interested and that is very important if this is part of a wider novel.
My only criticism would be to get rid of the adverbs, try to pick more active verbs so your need for adverbs would be eliminated. (Sorry- ignore if you don’t want these types of crits)

Lauri says The Butterfly People

]]> By: Selma http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/#comment-868 Selma Wed, 26 Nov 2008 05:49:22 +0000 http://glowstars.net/wpb/?p=676#comment-868 This is so poignant. I feel a bit teary myself. You have done such a good job with this. Brilliant writing! <abbr><em>Selma says <a href="http://selmainthecity.wordpress.com/2008/11/25/white-ribbon-day/" rel="nofollow">White Ribbon Day</a></abbr></em> This is so poignant. I feel a bit teary myself. You have done such a good job with this. Brilliant writing!

Selma says White Ribbon Day

]]> By: UrbanVox http://glowstars.net/daily-life/sky-full-of-butterflies/#comment-869 UrbanVox Tue, 25 Nov 2008 12:44:39 +0000 http://glowstars.net/wpb/?p=676#comment-869 is that the bit that made you cry???? is that the bit that made you cry????

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