Comments on: Verglas

By: Selma

Selma — Sat, 20 Dec 2008 11:43:38 +0000

So powerful. 'Perhaps I remembered how I used to love you....' That line moved me so much. So good. Selma says Two Glasses

By: Auds at Barking Mad

Auds at Barking Mad — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 19:19:19 +0000

I really love the imagery. I could see the entire thing.

By: marmite and tea

marmite and tea — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 13:17:18 +0000

I really loved that, great imagery marmite and tea says Contest

By: Milo

Milo — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 05:36:42 +0000

Enjoyed the stream of consciousness. Very vivid, especially the penultimate para. Milo says How do you do!

By: lissa

lissa — Wed, 17 Dec 2008 15:15:32 +0000

I imagine someone under ice, frozen inside their own unhappy end, quite lovely the way you wrote it, like a lost symphony drown out by the fallen lover lissa says Hell's Whiskey